Rain poem (untitled)
February 11th, 2003 by Katie. Posted in WritingIf I stepped out into untamed water
If I were to melt–
All this worldly spray paint
Swirling in bright whirlpools over the tiles–
If the sugar, the sweetness dripped off the light
Would the rain wash away in forty minutes
All I have left of self and greed?
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4 Responses to “Rain poem (untitled)”
By Brooke on Jun 12, 2003
Pretty! Brookie like!
By Jimmy on Jun 30, 2005
M SO HAPPY says:
no
IM SO HAPPY says:
we can
IM SO HAPPY says:
v
By Katie on Jul 4, 2005
Jimmy: The purple crack is not your friend.
By lea on Mar 20, 2006
Wow. I love this poem!!!!!!! I love it!!!!! Whoever wrote that, please please keep going!!!!!!!!!