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Rain poem (untitled)

February 11th, 2003 by Katie. Posted in Writing

If I stepped out into untamed water
If I were to melt–
All this worldly spray paint
Swirling in bright whirlpools over the tiles–
If the sugar, the sweetness dripped off the light
Would the rain wash away in forty minutes
All I have left of self and greed?

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4 Responses to “Rain poem (untitled)”

  1. Jimmy says:

    M SO HAPPY says:
    no
    IM SO HAPPY says:
    we can
    IM SO HAPPY says:
    v

  2. Katie says:

    Jimmy: The purple crack is not your friend.

  3. lea says:

    Wow. I love this poem!!!!!!! I love it!!!!! Whoever wrote that, please please keep going!!!!!!!!!

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