Rain poem (untitled)

Posted on February 11, 2003 by Katie

If I stepped out into untamed water
If I were to melt–
All this worldly spray paint
Swirling in bright whirlpools over the tiles–
If the sugar, the sweetness dripped off the light
Would the rain wash away in forty minutes
All I have left of self and greed?

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5 Responses to Rain poem (untitled)

  1. Brooke says:
    June 12, 2003 at 1:09 AM

    Pretty! Brookie like!

    Reply
  2. Jimmy says:
    June 30, 2005 at 11:19 PM

    M SO HAPPY says:
    no
    IM SO HAPPY says:
    we can
    IM SO HAPPY says:
    v

    Reply
  3. Katie says:
    July 4, 2005 at 11:41 PM

    Jimmy: The purple crack is not your friend.

    Reply
  4. lea says:
    March 20, 2006 at 9:28 AM

    Wow. I love this poem!!!!!!! I love it!!!!! Whoever wrote that, please please keep going!!!!!!!!!

    Reply
  5. jeneva may g. bandong says:
    January 11, 2010 at 3:30 AM

    o.m.g I LOVE THIS POEM…………………

    Reply

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